If you’ve ever typed “Florida Man” into your Google search bar, you know it’s true: real life is stranger than fiction - and often funnier. So it should come as no surprise that nonfiction books can be equally hilarious.
In the olden days (pre-Internet), information books for children tended to be dry bones fact delivery systems. Today’s books are much more than that. They offer context, connections, and narrative. And perhaps most importantly, they engage and inspire young readers.
Humor is a high-octane tool for hooking a reader. And a bit of rib-tickling makes the subject matter stick! That’s why I use humor frequently in my own nonfiction writing, even for super-serious subjects.
Here’s how I keep kids cracking up from the Table of Contents straight through to the glossary.
The Subject, naturally: When choosing
which experiments to highlight in my book Science on the Loose, I opted to
include “the famous fart experiment,” an actual study in which scientists in
the UK measured both the amount and intensity of flatulence in male and female
populations. While kids giggle and guffaw, they discover how to set up and
conduct a scientific experiment (starting with a hypothesis, controlling the
variables, accurate measurement, etc.) It’s real science, it’s really funny,
and it’s explosively (!) engaging.
Approach: Even when the subject matter is not inherently funny, like an authoritative biography of a forgotten math genius, a light touch can go a long way. As an example, consider the tone I used in Emmy Noether: The Most Important Mathematician You Never Heard Of: “Emmy was much smarter than everyone else in her classes. The other students knew it and didn’t much like it. After all, girls were not supposed to be smarter than boys (See page 6: not be geniuses.”)” The style is direct and wry. Lots of the side notes and captions are laugh-out-loud funny. The hits of humor highlight Emmy Noether’s own genial personality and acts as leaven for a text that might otherwise be dense with math and physics.
Language: Anyone who’s had to slog through an academic paper knows that convoluted sentence structure and jargon can make even a simple subject hard to understand and deadly dull. When I write for kids, I pay careful attention to my word choice, with a special focus on the way words and sentences sound. I use rhymes and alliteration liberally and tons of puns. I up my game with major league word play, and up the chuckles with sly juxtapositions (see what I did there?).
Some words are funnier than others. Words with the letter K in them, like kazoo or nincompoop, are widely considered the funniest. Repeated syllables also solicits smiles. In a choice between apples or bananas, I always go bananas.
Art: The illustrations are an important part of many books for children. They set the mood and convey lots of information that round out the text. A weighty subject, like dinosaur taxonomy, can get a lift from lighthearted pictures.
This is very much the case in That’s No Dino! – Or Is It?, my primary-level book about, yes, dinosaur taxonomy. Goofy, brightly-colored graphics by Marie-Eve Tremblay definitely get the giggles going – and clarify the subject matter in a way that is accessible to even young readers.
So if you’re no-nonsense about nonfiction, go for books that serve up giggle fits along with the facts. Because well-researched information is absolutely a laughing matter.
Give It a Try: Choose a nonfiction topic that appeals to you. How can you make it fresh and fun?
First, noodle around with your approach. If you’re writing about the rainforest, for example, think about different, unexpected approaches that lend themselves to humor. For example, you might present the Amazon from the point of view of a sloth – upside down!
Once you’ve got your angle, write a sample introduction. Try a variety of tones. Pick one that best captures the subject - and your own unique voice.
When you’ve got something that you think has potential, tweak your text until it feels light and fun on your tongue.
Humorous writing can be hard to pull off, especially if you feel nervous about putting yourself out there. Like all other writing skills, it requires practice and courage. So, stick with it! The verbal skills you develop will be useful in all your writing.
Meet the Author Helaine Becker is the award-winning author of more than 90 books for children and young adults, including the international bestseller Counting on Katherine: How Katherine Johnson Saved Apollo 13 and An Equal Shot: How the Law Title IX Changed America Forever. Recent nonfiction titles include Pirate Queen: A Story of Zheng Yi Sao and Emmy Noether: The Most Important Mathematician You Never Heard Of. Watch for The Fossil Whisperer: How Wendy Sloboda Discovered a Dinosaur later this spring.
YES! What a great article. I often struggle to write emotions into my work and so always end up relying on humor to get me through. I love the idea of threading it through NF as well :)ReplyDelete
Thanks for all these great suggestions - I love how you use wordplay and puns to amp up the humor in your books. Looking forward to The Fossil Whisperer!ReplyDelete
I write more lyrical NF but always try to put in humor as well!ReplyDelete
I'll be looking to see where I can add humor to my nonfiction. I love your Emmy Noether book and can't wait to check out your other titles.ReplyDelete
Humor is so important, and surprisingly hard to pull off. Thanks for your insights!ReplyDelete
Thank you, Helaine, for sharing your thoughts about including humor with nonfiction.ReplyDelete
Good post! Have to try the humorous touch soon. Thank you.ReplyDelete
I have such a hard time adding the humor factor even though in daily conversation people tell me I'm funny. I think I'll try to look at things upside down like your sloth! Thank you.ReplyDelete
Thank you for your upbeat post! I loved Counting on Katherine and so did the many students who checked it out from my media center. I am going to try your humor and word choice tips. I'm looking forward to reading your recent and forthcoming books.ReplyDelete
Thank you for this post, Helaine. Humor can be elusive when you get mired in all the facts. You've lightened the load for me with your insight and examples. Congrats on your published and soon-to-be published titles!ReplyDelete
I love your suggestions for ways to getting humor into nonfiction manuscripts! This will be a fun couple of books to check out! Thanks.ReplyDelete
Great suggestions! I loved the sloth example!ReplyDelete
I really believe children are enchanted by humor. Silly stories are the best.(my opinion)ReplyDelete
If it makes them want to read I'm all for it. Thanks for the tips!
Thanks for sharing your humorous approach.ReplyDelete
Wow! 90 books! I’m in absolute awe. Thanks for sharing the fart experiment.ReplyDelete
Great post! I love injecting humor in my biographies for MG audiences as well. Thank you!ReplyDelete
Love this explanation of levels of humor that can soften text. I often write "wry" but sometimes worry it's funny enough to be humor. Love that it makes the list:)ReplyDelete
What a great approach, Helaine! Thanks for sharing the important reminder and helpful tips.ReplyDelete
Thanks, Helaine - such good tips to make our writing fun and funner.ReplyDelete
Great tips on bringing in the humor. Thank you Helaine!ReplyDelete
Thanks for the tip on humour!ReplyDelete
Funny (hah) enough, I'm writing a NF MG proposal that is heavy on the humor, so this is a timely post; thanks, Helaine!ReplyDelete
Thanks for showing us various approaches to adding humor, and your own books as shiny examples.ReplyDelete