You have probably read nonfiction picture books that include sidebars–additional text that’s outside the flow of the main text and often formatted differently, such as being placed inside a text box or using a distinct, often smaller font. Not all nonfiction picture books have sidebars or need them, though.
So, how do you decide if your project would benefit from sidebars? And how do you choose what information to include, how long the sidebars should be, and more?
Let’s start with some ways that sidebars might be able to boost a manuscript.
Books with sidebars can reach
different kids in different ways. Depending on the reader’s age, level of interest in your
subject matter, current attention span, and more, they may be content to focus
on the main text, or they may be glad to have additional details ready to dive
into right there on the page. In that way, sidebars can be a way to “layer”
information for different audiences. I have also found sidebars can help me
market my book for a wider age range because I can show there is a thread for
younger children to follow, plus optional sidebars that can appeal to older
readers.
Sidebars can immediately answer readers’ burning questions. Maybe there are concepts or terms in your main text that some readers will be familiar with, but not all. You could briefly define those terms in sidebars, so the information is readily available to those who need it but can be skipped by those who don’t. Other kids may be so intrigued by your subject matter that they can’t wait to learn more–can you imagine what some of their questions might be, and give them more information in a sidebar?
Sidebars can convey additional information that is fun but not essential. Think factoids, trivia, statistics, and more–things that might add richness and be fun to share but that aren’t essential for understanding your main text.
Sidebars can give you flexibility and allow for varied voices. Sidebars can not only have a different format than the main text, but also a different tone. For example, if your main text is serious, sidebars can be silly (or vice versa). If your main text is lyrical, sidebars can convey more detail without using poetic language.
If I have decided a particular project could benefit from sidebars, I keep some things in mind when deciding how to write them:
- Be consistent with length and placement, whenever possible. If I have sidebars on some spreads, I try to have them on all spreads (except maybe the first and last spreads) or occurring at regular intervals. If it feels like I have to force that consistency, I try deleting the sidebars and moving that information to the back matter. It’s also nice to make the sidebars all about the same length, though that didn’t wind up being the case with This Book is Full of Holes (it just takes more words to explain wormholes than to discuss the familiar holes in a backyard sprinkler). When I use sidebars, I also try to keep the main text extra short, so the pages don’t feel crowded with words.
- Remember some readers will skip the sidebars entirely. It’s helpful to make sure readers won’t be completely confused if they only read the main text.
- Consider using a different voice for the sidebars than what is used for the text. Contrast funny/serious or rhyming/prose.
- Be open to changing it based on editorial feedback. There are, of course, multiple good ways to convey information. An editor may encourage an author to make sidebars shorter or longer (my editor, for example, wanted to make sure the sidebars felt complete–not short just for the sake of being short). Or an editor may suggest deleting the sidebars and integrating the information into the main text or the back matter. Welcome that conversation, and experiment.
Check
out some nonfiction picture books that have sidebars. Some recommendations to
start with:
● Up, Up High: The Secret Poetry of Earth's Atmosphere by Lydia Ludikis, illustrated by
Katie Rewse (Capstone, 2025).
● Thank you, Moon: Celebrating Nature’s Nightlight, by Melissa Stewart, illustrated by
Jessica Lanan (Knopf, 2023).
● Bounce! A Scientific History of Rubber, by Sarah Albee, illustrated by Eileen Ryan Ewen (Charlesbridge, 2024).
● This Book is Full of Holes: From Underground to Outer Space and Everywhere in Between, by Nora Nickum, illustrated by Robert Meganck (Peachtree, 2024).
First,
read through without reading any of the sidebars. Then, read each book a second
time and include every sidebar.
● What was the experience like each
time?
● What kind of content did the authors
put in sidebars instead of the main text? What content did they still leave for
the back matter?
● Can you identify another purpose of the sidebars besides the ones I mentioned above?
Now,
read a few nonfiction picture books that don’t have sidebars. How might the
inclusion of sidebars have changed the experience, the tone, or the target
audience/age?
I love how sidebars allow writers to add information into the main text but also keep things streamlined. Thanks for all the info about them, and for the helpful examples, Nora! I'm excited for THIS BOOK BUBBLES OVER to come out.
ReplyDeleteThanks, Robin! And I like that way of putting it - adding information while keeping things streamlined.
DeleteGreat post! My next book going on submission has sidebars. Fingers crossed 🤞🏻 I think sidebars are a great way to layer more complex information for older/more advanced readers or for teachers to use to expand their students’ learning. But you are right, there are many different ways and reasons to use sidebars. Thanks for the thought-provoking post!
ReplyDeleteAwesome Tonnye, I'm cheering on your new book and hoping it gets a spot on shelves soon - I'll look forward to reading the sidebars!
DeleteI have a few manuscripts where I've put sidebars. Now I'm going back with this post in front of me and see if I can improve how they impact my non fiction stories. Thank you!
ReplyDeleteI love hearing that, Mona - let us know if you have additional sidebar tips for us when you take another look at your own manuscripts and see what is working really well!
DeleteThese are excellent tips, Nora! I'm going back into my manuscripts to look them over to see if what I have could benefit from sidebars and the sidebars I do have are strong enough. Thanks for sharing!
ReplyDeleteSo glad it was useful for you, Debbie, and love hearing that you have manuscripts with sidebars. They can add so much!
DeleteThank you, Nora, for these examples and tips about the benefits of sidebars.
ReplyDeleteThanks for reading, Charlotte! Happy writing!
DeleteI'm a huge fan of sidebars so thanks so much for your post!
ReplyDeleteI love them too! Yay sidebars! :)
Delete"Be consistent with length and placement": such good advice and not immediately obvious! It makes a huge difference to the reader's experience to know what to expect.
ReplyDeleteYes! Great reminder for us to always think about how we're creating an experience for the reader.
DeleteThank you so much for this helpful post! I never tried sidebars before, but this has me very excited to see their many use, format, and content possibilities! This month has flown by and I'm going to miss the daily NFF posts until they come back again next year. Thanks so much NFF for all the wonderful sharing of tips and inspiration this month!
ReplyDeleteSo glad you've enjoyed this month's NFF posts, Heather. I have too! Hope you have fun checking out some books with sidebars and thinking about whether they might be a good thing to try out with any of your projects.
DeleteGreat post, Nora - lots to think about. I'm a big fan of layered text with or without sidebars. I like how sidebars put the facts right there as you're wondering about them, and saving you the trip to back matter to find out if your questions have been answered.
ReplyDeleteI love the way you put that - saving readers the trip to the back matter.
DeleteI’m a fan of sidebars written in the tone and style used in the main text. It’s fun to add fun tidbits that add to the layers.
ReplyDeleteWorking on sidebars right now - thanks!
ReplyDeleteI add sidebars to my manuscripts to support the text. Sidebars are a great way to include information to complement the text.
ReplyDeleteSo often when sharing my ms for critique I'm told the sidebars are distracting!