Wednesday, February 26, 2025

WHAT TO DO WITH ALL THE RESEARCH THAT WON’T FIT INTO YOUR STORY

by Michelle Cusolito

One of the biggest challenges of writing nonfiction books is corralling the volume of research I uncover. And then, there’s always way more information than I can reasonably fit into the main text of the book. I used to get frustrated, but I learned all of that “stuff” is valuable.

I’ll share examples from my work with the hope that they’ll spark ideas for you.

My top 6 suggestions:

     1. Front Matter/Back matter/end papers: I always include an author’s note that explains how I came to the story and how I researched it. I also include selected sources and suggested books, films, websites, etc. so young readers can learn more. Sometimes we include a glossary, or a diagram related to the book. For example, In the World of Whales has a detailed diagram of sperm whale anatomy created by Jessica Lanan. Sometimes content is even included on the endpapers. My editor and I knew we wanted to include the life cycle of jellyfish in Jellyfish Scientist: Maude Delap and Her Mesmerizing Medusas, but it didn’t fit in the back matter. Ellen Rooney created a gorgeous illustration for the end papers.


2. Content for Classroom Teachers/Teacher’s Guides: Create materials for teachers. Sometimes publishers will create materials, as well. (Here’s an example my publisher created for Diving Deep). I’ve often shared my ideas in blogposts such as on Patricia Newman’s LitLinks. One post called Will it Sink or Float is a hands-on experiment that makes use of my first two books. How to Turn a Student into an Effective Science Communicator is a writing focused lesson that utilizes my second two books.

     3. Blog posts: I love to include “insider details” related to the making of my book in blogposts. For example, on Sue Heavenrich’s blog, I shared details about how I kept track of my research while living and working on a research vessel to write A Window into the Ocean Twilight Zone: Twenty-Four Days of Science at Sea. On Jonathan Roth’s blog, I shared how I prepared physically and mentally to be out at sea in the North Atlantic.

     4. Stories for School and Library Visits/Other Speaking Engagements/Interviews: There’s always a fun story or fact that you want to include in your book, but it simply does not fit the narrative or the structure of the book. For example, Maude Delap, the focus of my next book is known for being the first person to raise jellyfish through their full life cycle (in rural Ireland from 1899-1900!) But there’s this amazing story about her hiring some men to help her bury a (stranded) whale carcass in her garden to help decompose the stinky flesh. She later sent the skeleton to the Natural History Museum in Dublin where it’s still displayed. Oh, how I wanted to put that in the main body of my book, but it simply didn’t fit with the story I was telling. I mention it in the back matter and I love to elaborate upon it when I do public speaking events.



5. Social Media Posts: One of my favorite things to do in the lead up to publication is prepare short posts for social media that share additional details/behind the scenes information. I’m preparing some of those right now for Jellyfish Scientist. I’ve visited the island where Maude lived, so I’m creating posts with photos and/or short videos that show where she went to church, where she lived, where she discovered the sea anemone that was named after her, etc. I’ll also share photos of me with some of the experts who assisted with my research. (I did this for A Window into the Ocean Twilight Zone, if you want to see examples. Or, watch for my Jellyfish Scientist posts on Instagram, coming soon).

     6. Write a New Book: Both of the books I have publishing this year are examples of this. I learned about Maude Delap while I was researching for another (not yet sold) book. Likewise, I learned the remarkable story featured in the book, In the World of Whales, while researching for my book Diving Deep. In this extraordinary story, a freediver was welcomed at the birth of a sperm whale. I immediately knew it had to be a book.

What ideas came up for you as you read this post? Brainstorm a quick list while everything is fresh in your mind. As you continue working on your book, jot your ideas down as they come to you. And save everything, including drafts and dummies. Those are great materials for school visits!

 
 
About the Author
Photo by Marley Parker

Michelle Cusolito is the award-winning author of Flying Deep: Climb Inside Deep-Sea Submersible Alvin, Diving Deep: Using Machines to Explore the Ocean, and Window into the Ocean Twilight Zone: Twenty-Four Days of Science at Sea. Jellyfish Scientist: Maude Delap  and her Mesmerizing Medusas comes out in April, and In the World of Whales publishes in June. Her not-yet-announced sixth book is a “land-based” book. Yep. She’s branching out. Michelle teaches writing in the MFA program at Simmons University.

30 comments:

  1. Robin Brett WechslerFebruary 26, 2025 at 8:45 AM

    I appreciate these ideas, Michelle, for ways to use all the information we collect. And I'm excited for your new books to come out!

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  2. Great post - I always want to include it all! But classroom sheets are a good idea.

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    1. I know! I feel the same way with every book. It's always a process of deciding what to use elsewhere.

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  3. Thank you for sharing your top six tips, Michelle.

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  4. I just put in a library request for both of your new books! Can't wait to read them.

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  5. Thank you so much for this helpful post! It felt like you could predict the future when I got to the end of the post and you encouraged us to list ideas that came to us as we read the post while they are fresh in our minds-I did have an idea about how to possibly improve a MS I've set aside that I was considering not jotting down, but your suggestion got me excited to jot it down and to add to it! Your work and adventures to research them sound amazing I'm following you on IG now!

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    1. Oh, I'm so glad! Yes! I have to capture my ideas right away or I forget them. I usually start each book in a simple composition book. Right from the start, I set up a page to list stuff for school visits, people to acknowledge, etc. Eventually, I migrate important stuff to my Scrivener file, but having a notebook works great for me because I carry it with me and bring it to my bedside table at night. I often capture ideas right before bed or as soon as I wake up. (I even wrote the first draft of WHALES in my notebook before I got out of bed one morning).

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  6. Your books sounds perfect for my ocean loving great grandson!

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  7. Thank you, Michelle, for sharing these tips. Every bit of research counts.

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    1. It sure does! I love sharing the extra tidbits in other ways.

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  8. There's no such thing as "too much research" when you've got so many fun ways to share what you've learned, Michelle! Great top six list - and thanks for the shout out for Archimedes Notebook.

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    1. Exactly!
      And, you're welcome. Thanks for hosting me. :)

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  9. Oh, I love this post so much! Yes, yes, yes! Fabulous ideas for how we can use the additional amazing discoveries we make as we are researching! It also tells me I’m on the right track for some things I have planned for my upcoming book release! ☺️❤️☺️ Thanks for the validation as well!

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  10. Ty, Michelle. All the time and energy we nonfiction writer spend on research needs to have a home. You have given us so many great ideas about how to harvest the leftover research that can't go into a book. So excited for your Jellyfish Scientist: Maude Delap and her Mesmerizing Medusas!

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  11. Great post, Michelle. I bet some of those "unfit" o non fitting facts are most fascinating for the school kids who always want to know more. Thank you!

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  12. It's so hard to choose from all the exciting information I find while researching, so these are great ways to use the bits that don't make it into the main text. I love all of your suggestions! I'll be making a list of other places I can put those fascinating facts in my newest WIP. Thanks for a great post! I'm looking forward to reading your new books. Congratulations!

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  13. I love your list of where to put extra information. It's so reassuring to know that no fascinating fact has to be wasted.

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  14. These all are exciting books to be read! Thank you for your top six tips Michelle!

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  15. Michelle, thank you for an excellent post with tips and reminders.

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