By Megan Clendenan
When I researched my middle-grade non-fiction book CITIES: HOW HUMANS LIVE TOGETHER (Orca Books, 2023), I had a skyscraper-high list of questions. What materials were the first streetlamps made from? How did ancient cities grow food? Whose house was first lit up by electric power? My goal was to write an engaging, surprising, and 100% accurate book for readers.
But how do you find, verify, and keep track of all this information?
Find
For CITIES, I consulted about 200 sources:
interviews, peer-reviewed scientific papers, and archival materials such as
newspapers and photographs. I look for primary sources as much as possible, such
as interviews, letters, or other first-hand materials. Otherwise, I
try to get as close to the source as I can. I don’t assume a news article
got the information right. I find and read the research myself, maintain a
healthy dose of skepticism and keep the question, ‘Says who?’ in mind.
Verify
An expert’s eyes on your
manuscript can be gold. For CITIES, I reached out to urban and environmental
planners as well as professors of history (Finding experts is a whole other
topic!). Several generously agreed to read
sections of my manuscript. And I was glad they did, as even after I did my due
diligence and had factually correct information, they provided expert context
on my overall narrative. Their comments enabled me to rethink a few points,
ultimately making the book much stronger.
Keep Track
I amass a mountain of notes and materials as I go. Organizing
research is easily its own blog post – and check this one out! I
know authors who use Microsoft OneNote or Google Drive, and others who use
binders with hand-jotted notes on paper. I set up research folders and files in
Microsoft Word, and keep track of sources with EasyBib, an online bibliography generator.
Ready for Fact Check?
After back-and-forth revisions with my editor, it
was time for copyedits and fact check. This is such an important step to ensure
the book is accurate! I sent my CITIES manuscript off with a bibliography. Phew!
Done. Or was I?
When my manuscript was returned, I found it chock-a-block with queries. Faced with a tight turnaround, I sat down and dug in. I was confident I had sources for everything, but as I rifled through my research, painstakingly answering each query, there were moments of trepidation as I sought out exactly where I’d pulled each piece of information.
Time for a new system to smooth out the fact-checking process! Here’s what I do now. Maybe some of this idea might be helpful to you.
Annotate with Aplomb!
Before sending my manuscript to copyedits, I save a
new copy and create an annotated version that shows my sources.
An annotated copy is basically your manuscript filled to the brim with comments or footnotes that indicate the source(s) for each piece of information, whether from a book, a scientific paper, or an interview you conducted. I also provide a full bibliography. It’s a tried-and-true system for many journalists, academics, and other researchers, and it makes good sense. Help your fact-checker help you!
It might seem like the best time to start your annotated copy is when you start writing, and that probably works for some writers, but I have a slightly different process. I do keep notes of all sources I’ve used for each section or chapter, and I refer to these notes as I create my final annotated copy, just before the manuscript is sent to copyediting.
The reason I fully annotate as one of my last steps is because I use this process to fact-check myself. Full disclosure: I dread this step! It’s tedious. But I’ve discovered places where I needed to revisit a statement and unearthed updated research that I may have missed otherwise. New research comes out all the time, and writing a manuscript can take years!
It’s work, yes, but after I hit send, I’m calm. I’m collected. I can sleep easy knowing that I did my due diligence to ensure an accurate book for readers, and, that any queries that come my way are most likely going to be easy….er… easier… to answer.
The next time I sent a manuscript for copyedits, it was returned with much fewer queries. Victory!
What’s your way?
Everyone has their own method of organizing – post
any tips, tricks, or resources to share in the comments!
About
the Author
Megan
Clendenan is an award-winning children’s book author and freelance writer. Her
books include Cities: How Humans Live Together (Orca Books, 2023,
illustrated by Suharu Ogawa), a Children’s Book Council Librarian’s
Favorite, Fresh Air, Clean Water: Our Right to a Healthy Environment
(Orca Books, 2022, illustrated by Julie McLaughlin), which won the Green Earth
Book Award, and the upcoming non-fiction picture book Just In Case: Saving
Seeds in the Svalbard Vault (Charlesbridge, Fall 2025, illustrated by Brittany
Cicchese). She has more books on the way! Megan lives with her family near
Vancouver, BC. Learn more at meganclendenan.com.
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ReplyDeleteIt certainly takes a lot of effort like an academic paper and the idea of the copy with the exact sources is good.
Thank you very much.
Thanks for reading!
DeleteThanks so much for this helpful post! I'm going to check out EasyBib and your books and I am looking forward to making annotated manuscripts-such a great tip!
ReplyDeleteI'm glad the post was helpful!
DeleteGreat post - I'm a big fan of footnotes.
ReplyDeleteThanks for reading Sue! Agreed, footnotes are super helpful. :)
DeleteGreat information on keeping our manuscripts so organized! Thank you for your post!
ReplyDeleteHi Deb - thanks for reading!
DeleteThank you Megan. Great post and information. I use MyBib which has been relatively easy to use. For the annotated part of your bibliography, are you physically making your own notes subjectively evaluating each of one of your sources credibility or is there a tool that is doing this for you on each source? Thanks, Marianne
ReplyDeleteHi Marianne: I use the citation created by the bibliography to paste the footnote in, but I do actually confirm in the source that my info is correct.
DeleteI could not believe how much fact checking I did for a 181-word board book about dinosaurs!
ReplyDeleteSo true, right!!
DeleteI love your question, Megan, "Says who?"
ReplyDeleteThank you.
Thanks for reading Sue - and yes, it feels like this question is so important these days!
DeleteI love your description of the annotated-draft-as-final-draft system. I do this too but had never seen it described so well as you do here. And I agree about the peace of mind it brings!
ReplyDeleteThanks Annette!
DeleteThank you for the great suggestions on organization. I am going to check out EasyBib to see if it's better than the one I'm presently using. This has been very helpful.
ReplyDeleteHi Debbie - I'm glad you found the post helpful.
DeleteGreat post full of actionable content! I especially like the idea of a final annotated copy! That makes sense!
ReplyDeleteThanks for these practical and helpful tips!
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