Monday, February 20, 2023

Begin with a Plan: Narrative Nonfiction Picture Books

By Donna Janell Bowman

I know the struggle well. You research like Ken Burns—widely and deeply— and then face the itty space of a picture book. You sit in front of your laptop, notebook, or notecards…and you freeze. Hours or months tick by. Suddenly, you realize that you’ve spent all your writing time scrolling social media and looking up how tall Channing Tatum is (FYI, he’s 6’1”). At some point, the chirp of insecurity drains your writing energy and clobbers you with the realization that you don’t know your story focus. This common problem has a common solution: create a plan.

First, remember this: Narrative nonfiction is a true story. The most satisfying stories are focused and have depth. In overly simplistic terms, a story is about a character who faces obstacles while in pursuit of a goal. Your character might be a wolf on a nighttime hunt; a dog’s adventure during a war; the Apollo 11 mission; the life cycle of a tornado; a community challenge; an unsung hero who did something notable. Whatever the subject, the specific angle or focus you choose should unfold in your story’s beginning, middle, and end. And for character-driven stories, their ordeal should reveal a universal human truth—a relatable theme.
 
What is a story focus?

Step one of crafting a plan should be nailing down your story focus. I learned this as a newbie writer while working on a little-known story about a founding father—a topic nobody had yet written about. But I was so enamored with this complex and fascinating character, I crammed his entire life into my spare picture book space. I overwrote that manuscript again and again, as a generalist writer instead of a specialist. I ultimately shoved it in a drawer for years. I’ve since learned that choosing a focused angle for a subject is akin to being a specialist, and that’s what picture book narratives require. An example is my book Abraham Lincoln’s Dueling Words, about an equally multi-dimensional character. That narrative is laser-focused on the events leading up to Lincoln’s close-call duel. You won’t find anything in it about his presidency or the other layers of his life that I learned about during my very deep research. Focus, focus, focus! 



The journey is the story

I’m a visual thinker, so when I embark on a new narrative nonfiction story idea, I envision my character climbing a metaphorical mountain. The character’s achievement is the metaphorical summit. Before they reach that achievement and stake their place in history and books, the character overcomes documented obstacles—those avalanches of self-doubt, skepticism from others, proverbial skinned knees, and hard-knock failures and restarts. When they get knocked down, the character pulls themself up and keeps going. Their external and internal journey IS the story! Of course, narrative nonfiction is not formulaic, and some narratives don’t follow the traditional three-act structure. But, as I tell my p.b. bio students, starting with a focused story plan is like having a trail map as a guide. When you know the tried-and-true path, you’re less likely to fall off a cliff and into Channing Tatum’s bio.

Tip: When you find yourself lost in too many details or blocked by overwhelm, begin your plan from the story’s ending. Put your character on the summit of their achievement, which is likely your story resolution. From that satisfying perspective, retrace the character’s steps. Don’t get distracted by your character’s other shiny paths! Follow only the footprints that led to THE achievement/resolution/ending. It’s okay if you must incorporate essential details from other aspects of their life, but only enough to give the character and the journey context. You could even try writing the ending scenes of your book first. Planning from the ending to the beginning can be like plugging your destination into a navigation system. 

Need more help boiling your story down to its core? Here are a few overview templates to experiment with. There are subtle differences between them, so try them all until you find the one that fits your needs. Remember that these are intended to be generative, not prescriptive. And, hey, you can use them for fiction, too.  

A

Despite _______________________________________(insert 1-3 relevant obstacles),

my character, __________________________________(name your character),

chooses to ____________________________________(name specific external plot actions),

and ultimately accomplishes ______________________(insert THE notable accomplishment or story climax), 

thanks to their________________________________(insert 1-3 specific character traits).

Ultimately, they learn _________________________ (story theme).


B

During a time when _______________________________________(societal expectation),

my character, _________________________________________________(name),

believed _______________________________________ (the belief or goal that contrasted 

others’ expectations). 

Despite ______________________________________ (state 1-3 internal &

external obstacles), (Character name) _____________________________________________

accomplished __________________, thanks to ______________(character traits that reveal the theme).


C

More than anything, [character name] wants or needs [problem or goal].

While [group or society context that shows what opposed them],

they try to solve the problem by [1st attempt], but they fail because [what went wrong?].

They try again by [2nd attempt but fail because [what went wrong?].

They try again by [3rd attempt] but fail when [insert what went wrong].

Finally, they succeed by [final attempt that’s different] and learn [insert theme]. 

If you were able to concisely fill in the blanks, congratulations, you have distilled your story to its focused core! Now you can flesh it out into a scene-by-scene outline or start writing. But first, buckle up for a bonus exercise. 




Bonus: Turn your Summary into a Pitch

Why wait until your manuscript is completed to write a sparkly pitch that would be perfect for submitting to agents or editors? Write it now as an exercise to boost your confidence and cement your narrative goal firmly in your mind. Simply flesh out your earlier exercise into a ~100-word summary. You can thank me later!

Here’s an example of how I used focus elements to craft a ~100-word summary for the autobiographical picture book that Billy Mills and I wrote, coming in 2024. The tight story focus for Wings of an Eagle: The Gold Medal Dreams of Billy Mills is clear. You know exactly what the book is about, from Billy’s challenges to the themes of chasing a dream and giving back. Is it perfect? Certainly not! There are many ways I could smooth its rough edges. But it’s almost the exact pitch that accompanied the manuscript that was acquired by Little, Brown Books in a pre-empt.

He faced poverty on the Pine Ridge Indian Reservation, was orphaned by age 12, developed a debilitating health condition, and struggled against extreme racism, but Billy Mills persevered against all odds by chasing a dream. In 1964, he became the first American to win Olympic Gold in the 10,000-meter event—the second Native American in history to win Gold in any Track & Field event, after Jim Thorpe. Billy knew then that it was time for his traditional Lakota Giveaway. He stepped off the winner’s podium and into a life of service, helping Indigenous people worldwide.

Now that you’ve added planning tools to your narrative nonfiction writing gear, you’re ready to scale your own picture book mountain without getting overwhelmed or lost. So, what are you waiting for?


Meet the Author:
 
Donna Janell Bowman is an award-winning central Texas author, speaker, and writing teacher. She’s especially drawn to nonfiction because true stories are often like lightning bugs—too irresistible not to follow. Her books for young readers include STEP RIGHT UP: HOW DOC AND JIM KEY TAUGHT THE WORLD ABOUT KINDNESS, illustrated by Daniel Minter; ABRAHAM LINCOLN'S DUELING WORDS, illustrated by S.D. Schindler; KING OF THE TIGHTROPE: WHEN THE GREAT BLONDIN RULED NIAGARA, illustrated by Adam Gustavson; and the forthcoming WINGS OF AN EAGLE: THE GOLD MEDAL DREAMS OF BILLY MILLS, co-authored with Bill Mills, and illustrated by S.D. Nelson. Donna has an MFA in Writing from Vermont College of Fine Arts. 






























41 comments:

  1. I write picture books. Thanks so much for the templates. I'll be using them!

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  2. I appreciate your overview of how to focus PB biographies, Donna, and write them as a story. The templates are especially helpful! I'm a huge fan of your books and I'm excited to check out your new one coming out.

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  3. Thank you for such specific and focused advice!

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  4. Karyn Friedman-EverhamFebruary 20, 2023 at 11:03 AM

    Oh my gosh, so much meat in this post! Thank you, thank you, Donna.

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  5. Thanks so much for the visual and the outlines! So helpful.

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  6. Yes! Distilling the story down has been a problem of mine. I can’t wait to try these templates. Thank you

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  7. As a newbie, I felt like jello without a bowl because my facts were not a story. I love the idea of starting with the end; as a retired teacher, we teach that as a study skill. The 100 word summary is gold! Appreciate all you do!

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  8. Love the template overviews! So helpful! Thanks, Donna.

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  9. Wonderful advice! Thanks!

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  10. This post is a keeper!! Thank you for bringing focus and avoiding rabbit hole #35 for my story.

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  11. There's no need to wait when I have helpful tools you shared, Donna. Time to climb a PB mountain.

    Thank you.
    Suzy Leopold

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  12. A very timely and helpful post as I have two pitches due Friday!

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  13. As I stare at my own mountain of research, this is EXACTLY what I needed to read today. Thank you!!

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  14. I love Donna's wisdom and recommend her PB bio class to everybody!

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  15. I relate to the first paragraph! I get so bogged down with the mountain of research I'm too overwhelmed to write! You have given excellent tip to focus and climb that mountain with steps in the right direction. Thanks for the great post.

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  16. Thank you Donna for the templates. And that pitch is awesome. Thanks again for a great post.

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  17. The templates are so helpful and I love the idea of fleshing out the pitch before finishing a draft - I do this with fiction and nonfiction. Thanks, Donna and congrats to you (and Bill Mills) on the forthcoming book!

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  18. Hi Donna! I fall into rabbit hole researching every aspect of my fiction, nonfiction and info-fiction stories. Thanks for sharing how you find the core.

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  19. Donna, thank you for the overview templates, tips, and terrific insights into writing a narrative NF PB!

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  20. Thank you for the story arc outlines - I have published lots of fiction but seem overwhelmed when I try nonfiction. So many fact - so little space!

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  21. Great post -- thanks for sharing your tips!

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  22. Thank you! Your idea of starting at the end of the story is exactly what I needed for the story I have been pondering for 2 years. After my original research and brainstorming, the information was overwhelming. Templates and your ideas are my motivation today to refocus.

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  23. Thank you for the reminder about working backwards. I always forget to do that. I’m taping it on my writing space wall right now! 😉

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  24. This is a great post with your "smart" templates. Thanks for sharing.

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  25. Donna, thank you for your kind and very helpful advice.

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  26. DONNA: All of these tips and tools will TRULY HELP us reach our own summits on our writing journeys up those STEEP mountains! We're now ALL-EQUIPPED for the journey. The BIGGEST take-away for me: try writing the story backwards. As a directionless person, I think you just gave me THE BEST COMPASS OF ALL! THANK YOU!!! SEE YOU AT THE TOP; the view will be BREATHTAKING!!!

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  27. Thanks for these fantastic and concrete takeaways! Much appreciated.

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  28. Amazing, amazing, amazing. I can't thank you enough for the summary "formulas." I have no doubt they'll help me focus my research. :)

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  29. Those templates are great! Thanks for such an amazing post.

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  30. This has been the most helpful post to me this NF Fest.

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  31. I must have missed the announcement for the Billy Mills book, but I'm excited to read that. Congrats, Donna!

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  32. Donna, these templates are SO helpful, thank you!!! (I went GAH! when I saw them and copied and pasted, hooray!)

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  33. I'm also a visual learner so I appreciate your mountain illustration, really hit home! Thank you Donna ;)

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  34. These templates are super helpful Thanks so much!

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  35. Thanks for all the kind words, friends! Happy writing to you!

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  36. These are fabulous tips for finding a story's focus, also for staying focused, something I struggle with. My ADHD sends me all over the place, so I have to rein myself in repeatedly. Thank you!

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  37. Donna, you are brilliant. This post is even more evidence. Thank you! <3

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