Before I can start writing a biography, I need to know
exactly who I'm writing about. That of course means doing all kinds of
research. I read interviews, articles, and books. I watch any videos available,
go through photos, census records, and yearbooks. I am collecting the facts that
will make up my subject’s biography. But I'm looking for more than an accurate
timeline of their lives. As I go through the bits and pieces and put together
the facts, I'm trying to uncover my subject’s character.
When illustrators talk about character, we mean a visual
representation of all the traits and the dimensions of the person/animal or
object written about. Everything, clothing, hairstyle, and pose, conveys to the
reader who that character is and why they should care about them. In nonfiction
picture books, this is vital. As nonfiction authors, we want our books to be
more than a collection of facts--we want the reader to engage with the story and
care about the subject. So how do we do this? One way is to uncover your
subject's character.
The photos, videos, and interviews I found when researching Annette Kellerman for ANNETTE FEELS FREE emphasized Annette's passion for dancing from a young age, and her passion for swimming, diving and, swim dancing after her illness. I even found a video of her swim dancing at 70 years old, and she was smiling contentedly, absolutely at peace doing what she loved. This was a clue to who she was, her character. While the text discusses her accomplishments and how hard she worked to achieve them, it's in the illustrations that I emphasize to the reader that Annette is happiest when she's dancing, swimming, or diving.
Annette comes across as opinionated and outspoken in her
interviews and in her own writing. When she believed strongly in something, she
spoke up. So, while the text describes Annette's arrest on Revere Beach for
wearing what was essentially a man's swimsuit, it's the illustration that
emphasizes to the reader who Annette was: a strong, confident woman. She stands
with her hands on her hips and stares the policeman directly in his eyes when
accused of and arrested for indecent exposure.
In contrast the subject of my upcoming picture book biography, BEULAH HAS A HUNCH!, Beulah Henry was demure rather than outspoken. She took pride in being a “lady”. This contrast, a well-mannered lady in a man’s world, was a major piece of Beulah’s character, as well as a key to her success (who else can invent better for women than another woman?) So, as an illustrator, I emphasized this by illustrating Beulah wearing gowns and pearls even in the factories and when lying on the floor drawing.
Meet the Author/Illustrator:
Katie Mazeika is an
Ohio girl, born and raised! She grew up in Cincinnati, graduated from The
Columbus College of Art and Design, and now lives in the Cleveland area with
her husband, two kids, and two dogs.
Katie can’t imagine a
better job than making books. She specializes in telling stories based on real
people and events and likes to highlight disabled voices and create characters
that make an impression. Katie’s author/illustrator debut ANNETTE FEELS FREE: THE
TRUE STORY OF ANNETTE KELLERMAN, WORLD-CLASS SWIMMER, FASHION PIONEER AND
REAL-LIFE MERMAID was awarded Picture Book of the Year 2022 by the Northern
Light Book Awards and is a Junior Library Guild Gold Selection. Her next book
BEULAH HAS A HUNCH! INSIDE THE COLORFUL MIND OF MASTER INVENTOR BEULAH LOUISE
HENRY comes out in the fall of 2023. You can visit Katie online at
www.katiemazeika.com
Thanks for the helpful reminder regarding biographies and sharing a bit of your process, Katie. I love your story of Annette Kellerman and I'm eager to read BEULA HAS A HUNCH!
ReplyDeleteThanks so much for Annette Feels Free and describing the process.
ReplyDeleteThank you, Katie, for the reminder to write a story so the reader will care.
ReplyDeleteI look forward to reading your books.
Suzy Leopold
Thanks so much for these! I can't wait to "dive" in to these great examples.
ReplyDeleteThis is an excellent reminder that truthful writing about a person, means we have to know who they are. Thanks!
ReplyDeleteGood lesson here. Looking forward to reading your books. Thank you!
ReplyDeleteExcellent advice, Katie! Congratulations on the new book and the well-deserved acclaim for Annette Feels Free!
ReplyDeleteyou make it clear that not only do we need to KNOW our character, we have to care about who they are. Thanks for sharing your insights.
ReplyDeleteCan’t wait to see Beulah!
ReplyDeleteIt's interesting to see how you can pull such personality details from your research. Thanks for taking the time to share your tips and process.
ReplyDeleteKATIE: THANK YOU for the INSPIRATION to not get caught up in the world of facts, so we don't miss the most important part of a picture book bio itself--the person. Seeing how you, as both the writer and illustrator, bring your characters to life by balancing their traits through these different mediums is TRULY HELPFUL for our own work! THANK YOU!!!
ReplyDeleteYes! Great reminders, thank you!
ReplyDeleteThank you, Katie, for sharing your research into the heart of the character and the story that only you can tell. Congratulations on your forthcoming book! Pure inspiration!
ReplyDeleteLove the focus on the inside of a character. Thank you Katie!
ReplyDeleteLove these tips, Katie, and I look forward to reading your next PB bio!
ReplyDeleteLoved reading about how you find your character. Thanks Katie!
ReplyDeleteThanks for the insight into trying to reveal character in your writing.
ReplyDeleteLove the ladies you found to research and really got to know. Really like how you showed us their opposite demeanor even though they were both strong women. Thank you for sharing how you got to meet them!
ReplyDeleteThanks for sharing your thoughts, Katie!
ReplyDeleteIt's a great tip to look for the nuances. I love this. Thanks and congrats on both books. They look wonderful.
ReplyDeleteExcellent thank you. Love learning was to get to the heart of stories.
ReplyDeleteI always learn so much about the layering in PBs when someone like you shares from the illustrators pov. Thank you!
ReplyDeleteKatie, thank you for showing us how to find and keep our eyes on our subject's character and unique spark while we are researching and writing their story. I am looking forward to reading your books!
ReplyDeleteThis was a fascinating insight into character from an illustrator perspective—perfect timing for me, as I am working through character issues now and was only addressing them from the author perspective. Thanks!
ReplyDeleteThank you Kathy for your great tips on researching and creating an illustrative mindset when writing your story.
ReplyDeleteHeros are real people wiht different approaches to life and the times they live. Thanks for the reminder.
ReplyDeleteResearch is one of my favorite things to do. Thanks for your helpful tips.
ReplyDeleteThank you, Katie! Great job researching and showing real people.
ReplyDeleteWonderful post. Thanks for your great examples.
ReplyDeleteSo interesting to consider characterization from the illustrator's perspective! Thanks for sharing!
ReplyDeleteThis post really spoke to me. It was a great reminder to not just look at the character in a "just the facts maam" type of way, but to look for clues to who they were as if they were someone you had met. I was also fascinated that illustrators consider all the traits and the dimensions of the person/animal or object before rendering a visual representation. Thanks for a great post!
ReplyDeleteCongratulations on both your books, Katie! Thanks for a glimpse into your writing and illustrating process!
ReplyDeleteGreat biographies, Katie. Thank you for giving a little insight into the the junction of the illustration and the text, the way the work together to present the character and make ther reader care.
ReplyDeleteThanks for reminding us to see the world from our character's POV. The small nuances of daily life can shape how our subjects present to the world. Appreciate all you do!
ReplyDeleteThese women are so interesting and I really appreciate how you got to the core of each of them. Thank you for sharing your insights.
ReplyDelete"Look for the nuances..." Super advice!
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