I think all stories are born from curiosity. What if a shark played the ukulele? What do sperm whales eat? How large were T Rex eggs? Where do trucks get washed?
While the idea for BIG TRUCK SUPER WASH came out of the blue, my other new book, GIRAFFE MATH, was another matter.
I’ve been trying to write a book about giraffes for over a decade because I think they are ridiculously cool and one of the most unique creatures on the planet. My Vermont buddy, Peter Lourie, and I first proposed The Giraffe Scientist for the Scientist in the Field series with Houghton Mifflin Harcourt in 2009. Pete would take pictures and I would write. After HMH and others rejected our project, we tried a new hook, Tall Beauty-Desert Giraffes of Africa. This was to be an adult coffee-table-style book about giraffes living in the Namibian desert. After a year or so of submitting we realized it was not to be.
I couldn’t shake my obsession with giraffes so I tried writing a very simple and short nonfiction manuscript about giraffes. It flopped. About the time GIRAFFES CAN'T DANCE, I thought I’d try a funny book about giraffes. No go. Then I played around with a giraffe joke book. My manuscript was a joke! I even tried a young nonfiction book that I thought might work as a board book. My ingenious title for that one was Giraffes Are Tall.
After over a decade of giraffe book trial and error, I hit the pause button. Shortly thereafter I was invited to Kenya for an author visit. After the school visit, my wife and I went on a 3-day safari. Seeing giraffes in the wild reignited my fascination for this creature.
When I got back home, I sat down with a blank yellow pad and began making a list of things I knew about giraffes. How tall they were. How long was their tongue. Their weight. How long they sleep. I looked at the page and realized it was all numbers. It was math! It wasn’t long before I connected Giraffe with Math and I had my title, GIRAFFE MATH.
Do you have a manuscript that seems to be stuck? Is it possible your younger nonfiction story is really mid-grade nonfiction? Would lyrical poems best suit your tale about baby dinosaurs? What if you told your examination of recycling practices from the first-person point of view? There’s no ironclad way to write your nonfiction manuscript.
Moral of the story: some ways to tell your story take a very, very long time to congeal, to crystallize. Be flexible. Be patient. Never give up.
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Thank you for this inspiring post! I'm following you on Instagram now and I look forward to reading your works with my daughter! I've been on a similar journey with the manuscript I am querying with right now. I'm obsessed with tardigrades and have been writing different adventures with my main character for years! Finally, I have written an adventure with him that has gotten a revise and resubmit query opportunity I'm waiting to hear back about, so I think I've finally found the right way to tell Tardigrade's story!
ReplyDeleteWay to be persistent Steve! I have a similar topic that I’ve written in several formats, genres, and age group and finally land the winner with an Arcadia book contract, slated to come out early 2025. Looking forward to your giraffe book:)
ReplyDeleteMakes me feel so much better about a book I have written ten different ways. Thank you
ReplyDeleteThanks for the pep talk. I have a ms I submitted many times, all with encouraging comments, but something was always "not quite right" for them. I've rewritten, revised and reimagined for several years. I'll just keep plugging away and maybe I'll have that ah-ha moment as you did. Congratulations on Giraffe Math and its success!
ReplyDeleteHow cool to be invited to Kenya for an author visit!! And what an opportunity for you. I am glad you finally ended up finding a way to present your story about your giraffes. Thanks for sharing and reminding me, some stories do take a lot of time to gel.
ReplyDeleteThanks for sharing! I connected with this post and your books. I have several cool creatures that I'm determined to keep writing about in different formats.
ReplyDeleteEvery book has its own schedule, it seems. And sometimes they just like to play hide-and-seek with us until we find how they want to be told...
ReplyDeleteFunny! Love all the interations you tried to make this work and how you were finally able to make a story for the animals you love! Patience, indeed.
ReplyDeleteYou are so right about curiosity! The world is all potential stories if you wonder about stuf!!
ReplyDeleteWhat an interesting backstory! I have a couple of ideas like this and hope to find that sweet spot soon!
ReplyDeleteLove hearing the journey of stories! Thank you.
ReplyDeleteThank you, Steve. Patience and perseverance are certainly needed in the KidLit industry.
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I love this. Persistence does pay off. I published a HFNovel that I started on 10 years before I published it. I kept changing it and kept changing it 'til I got it right. I have several PB manuscripts that I need to revise and try different ways.
ReplyDeleteI could so relate to your giraffe journey! Thanks for a great story and the reminder to never give up...I've got a couple (or more) of topics I can't let go of, but can't find the right approach for...
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