Thursday, February 8, 2024

LOCATION, LOCATION, LOCATION: THE SECRET OF WRITING BOOKS ABOUT EVENTS

By NancyChurnin

 

The first time I tried to turn a real-life event into a picture book, I struggled.

Many know me for my picture book biographies. But if you think about it, MANJHI MOVES A MOUNTAIN  and DEAR MR. DICKENS, which are often grouped with my biographies, are actually stories of real events. Manjhi is the story of Dashrath Manjhi, who spent 22 years chiseling a path through a 300-foot mountain to help his village. In my first attempts at telling his story, I talked about his childhood. That didn’t work because this was not really a story about his life, but about what he had done that had changed his village, the people in it, and beyond. The book didn’t take shape until I began and ended with the mountain. Because while Manjhi is my main character, my focus is actually on his action – moving the mountain.

Similarly, DEAR MR. DICKENS is the story of how letters Eliza Davis wrote to Charles Dickens made him see how ugly, hurtful and unfair Jewish stereotypes in his novel were. I spent a long time struggling to trace Eliza’s childhood. When I realized this was not really a biography of Eliza, but the story of how her words changed Dickens, I started with the question of speaking up, with how Dickens’ words stirred readers to compassion and how this woman was determined to use words to change Dickens in a way that would ultimately change his readers.

I have a new book coming out in July, RAINBOW ALLIES: THE TRUE STORY OF KIDS WHO STOOD AGAINST HATE,  which is even more obviously a story of a real event. When a lesbian couple comes home to find their home egged and their rainbow flag torn down, kids in their neighborhood came up with a wonderful way to make this family feel safe and loved again. This time I knew that while the kids were the heroes of the story, this book had to begin and end with a kind neighborhood that had been sullied by this ugly deed and how the kids loving act made it beautiful again. 

When you write about events, think about framing your narrative around a place – like a mountain or a neighborhood – and use your words as Eliza did to reach the hearts of your readers.






About the Author:
 

Nancy Churnin is the award-winning author of 16 books (and more on the way) that shine a light on heroes that inspire kids to be heroes, too. Her honors include the National Jewish Book Award, Sydney Taylor Honor and Notables, South Asia Book Award, Junior Library Guild selections, Silver Eurekas, Kids Choice Awards, multiple state reading lists and starred reviews.  She lives in North Texas and is a proud member of KidLitForGrowingMinds and Nonfiction Ninjas, the founders of NFFest.

23 comments:

  1. Getting at the heart of the story is such a challenge but these are all beautiful examples. Thank you!

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  2. Nancy, I love how your journalism background clearly plays into your writing because you do a fantastic job, not only of finding the stories that will inspire, but of figuring out what the meat of the story is. I will try to channel some of your focus as I continue to create!

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  3. This whole post inspires, even continued within your author bio that says you are the author of books that " shine a light on heroes that inspire kids to be heroes, too." This is so helpful to keep in mind for shaping all kinds of stories. Sometimes it is easy to write from the wrong angle and it helps to put this thought into each MS draft. My household enjoys reading your work. Thanks for all you do and for today's post!

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  4. Such a great take on this! I appreciate the tip on writing from a place in NF. Best, Melissa H. Mwai

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  5. Nancy, thanks for your words of wisdom! As I'm working on a new NF I'll be pondering your advice.

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  6. You made me look at "biographies" in a whole new way...thank you, Nancy!

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  7. I love place as a character. You really bring out how that can be key.

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  8. NANCY: THANK YOU for the INSPIRATION to find the HEART of our stories by looking beyond the characters themselves. And THANK YOU for the reminder that just like Eliza, our words can TRULY reach and change hearts. I SO LOVE your BEAUTIFUL stories! KEEP 'EM COMING!

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  9. Thank-you for your post! I'm truly looking forward to reading your new book Rainbow Allies!

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  10. Thank you, Nancy, for sharing ways to get to the heart of the story that you want to tell. Looking forward to reading your latest book.

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  11. This was a great post, Nancy. I appreciate you sharing your struggles with your manuscripts and how you came to find the true heart of the story. I plan to go back and look at some of my WIP that have left me stumped or frustrated with the direction they were going. I will take your advice and look for what is the true heart of the story under the mountains of research. Thank you!

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  12. Thanks for sharing! I like the way you focus on a specific event rather than someone's whole life in each PB. In DEAR MR. DICKENS, I was drawn into the story by your three questions.

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  13. Nancy, thank you so much for the reminder and examples of finding the focus and the heart of our stories. Love your books and look forward to this new one.

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  14. I’m inspired to read PB biographies with an eye for the place. Thank you, Nancy.

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  15. Your books don’t show your struggle, Nancy. They read as if of course this was the perfect path to take to tell your story. Thank you for sharing your process. It’s encouraging to know. And congrats on your new book! What an important subject and theme of love for everyone.

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    1. I don’t know why my comment posted as “anonymous.” This is Amy Houts.

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    2. Hi, Amy! I, too, am noting I am unable to comment with my Google account and wants to set the comment as Anonymous. My earlier comments were posted correctly.

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  16. My latest NF PB on sub is so tied to PLACE...it's almost a character too. Great post!

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  17. I think the best stories have a sense of place to them.

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  18. Focusing on a place is a great perspective to start with and make the heart of the story. Thank you Nancy!

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  19. Thank you, Nancy, for sharing the importance of framing a narrative.

    Suzy Leopold

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  20. Another new angle to study! Very worthwhile post.

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  21. Nancy - thanks for a wonderful post about how to frame a NF story. You know I love ALL your books and I look forward to reading RAINBOW ALLIES.

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